From 88e5750c86e8a334a32d75e51b4c2f1fe2e2ea7b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Aria <aria@suma-ev.de>
Date: Mon, 4 Jun 2018 12:20:46 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Unschoen klingenden Satz angepasst

---
 resources/lang/en/beitritt.php | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/resources/lang/en/beitritt.php b/resources/lang/en/beitritt.php
index 66ea1181b..463110071 100644
--- a/resources/lang/en/beitritt.php
+++ b/resources/lang/en/beitritt.php
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ return [
     "heading.1"	=>	"SUMA-EV membership application ",
     'ansprache.1'   => 'Thank you for considering joining SUMA-EV. By applying, you choose to take a more active role in representing the values we stand for. Reinforcing and developing our rights is only possible together. To complete your application it is required to make some choices and sign this form. What happens with your data?',
     'ansprache.2'   => 'Some of the following fields are required, others are optional.',
-    'ansprache.3'   => 'For maintenance reasons underlined data needs to be entered. If you should ever withdraw your membership, all data will be destroyed at the latest 2 years after your withdrawal.',
+    'ansprache.3'   => 'For maintenance reasons underlined data needs to be entered. If you should ever withdraw your membership, all data will be deleted at the latest 2 years after your withdrawal.',
     'ansprache.4'   => 'The form containing the debit authorization is used for creating an automatic debit entry (GLS-Bank) and is stored seperately from your other personal data. We keep this data for evidence of your authorization. Of course, this data will be deleted as well, should you ever choose to withdraw your membership.',
     'ansprache.5'   => 'You can find more information about the usage of your data in our <a href="https://metager.de/en/datenschutz#ihrerechte">privacy policy</a>.',
     "beitritt.1"	=>	'I hereby declare a:',
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ return [
     "beitritt.12"	=>  'As a membership fee I choose: ',
     "beitritt.13"	=>	"EUR per month.",
     "beitritt.14"	=>	"Place, Date:",
-    "beitritt.15"   =>  'The contribution is reviewed annually on 01 August debited in advance or from date of admission pro rata for the first year.',
+    "beitritt.15"   =>  'The contribution is debited annually on August 1st in advance or from date of admission pro rata for the first year.',
     "unterschrift"	=>	"Place, date and signature after printing the form ",
     "abbuchung.2"	=>	"Debit authorization",
     "abbuchung.3"	=>	"I hereby authorize the “SUMA-EV - association for free access to knowledge” to withdraw the membership fee debited from my account. ",
-- 
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